i started playing your game this moring and i have to say this is extremely nicely built!
the scenes are easy to understand and dialogues are simple and nicely written!
i do have little suggestions to make to upgrade this game:
-change colors of the clients text when its a recipe, and use three distinct colors when orders are asked to help the player read the order faster
-use a list style order (i saw that sometimes when the name of the recipe is too long, it tends to look hard to read), it arranges nicely the order and makes it look cleaner to the eye!
-maybe add a page of recipes for basic ingredients such as meatballs, hashbrown, and other forms of ingredients for players that are non-english, as culture may differ the ways of cooking and it can be really time-taking to find the right way to cook an ingredient.
this is all for the reccomendations!
i also noticed a problem when i make the full breakfast meal as i cant put the sausage with the vegeterian breakfast, it just wont work.. please tell me if i did anything wrong while doing this meal!
Thanks for playing my game and leaving such a kind and helpful review! Since I made the game for a jam I don't plan to return to the project it was more for a bit of fun and a learning experience. However if I ever to return to the game I will definitely add the features you suggested. I wanted to add more during the jam but ultimately I ran out of time and could not add everything I had hoped to add.
As for your problem with the full breakfast I'm not sure exactly its been a while since I worked on the game but I do remember there being problems with a few recipes.
Once again thanks for playing my game and leaving a review it means a lot :)
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hi!
i started playing your game this moring and i have to say this is extremely nicely built!
the scenes are easy to understand and dialogues are simple and nicely written!
i do have little suggestions to make to upgrade this game:
-change colors of the clients text when its a recipe, and use three distinct colors when orders are asked to help the player read the order faster
-use a list style order (i saw that sometimes when the name of the recipe is too long, it tends to look hard to read), it arranges nicely the order and makes it look cleaner to the eye!
-maybe add a page of recipes for basic ingredients such as meatballs, hashbrown, and other forms of ingredients for players that are non-english, as culture may differ the ways of cooking and it can be really time-taking to find the right way to cook an ingredient.
this is all for the reccomendations!
i also noticed a problem when i make the full breakfast meal as i cant put the sausage with the vegeterian breakfast, it just wont work.. please tell me if i did anything wrong while doing this meal!
your game is great i love it!!
have a nice day :-)
Thanks for playing my game and leaving such a kind and helpful review! Since I made the game for a jam I don't plan to return to the project it was more for a bit of fun and a learning experience. However if I ever to return to the game I will definitely add the features you suggested. I wanted to add more during the jam but ultimately I ran out of time and could not add everything I had hoped to add.
As for your problem with the full breakfast I'm not sure exactly its been a while since I worked on the game but I do remember there being problems with a few recipes.
Once again thanks for playing my game and leaving a review it means a lot :)